Some people work for the same
organisation all their working life.
Others think that it is better to work for
different organisations.
Discuss both these views and give your
own opinion.
The majority of people works in the some job throughout his life, on the other hand this idea is quite correct while working variety organization this view correct in my opinion.
Firstly working some organization this is very comfortable and the salary it is difficult becouse there work for a long time to you payed much money. As a consiquence the work it come becomes a part of life moreover your intrest in your work in your work while increase for this reason you did not like working other organization.
Secondly, most of people wanted working different organizations but they get no benefit from it becouse they have not been studied this working and cannot get more salary the work as a metter of facting working a lots of organizations this is very useless simillarly it is very difficult to organization there in my opinion.
Other of people said worked different organizations an usefull. However i did not believe and through i realied that it is very geratin the same way see scenic plases moreover you will learn interestingly how to live life and mood sharply increased to hundered degree thus you working the most of organizations. Therafore studying very much and you must achievement to aims and dont stop their achievement.
In conclusion, the majority of people working a lots of organizations and this view truth. Working the some organization it is very dull in my opinion, therafore we studying very much and achievement to aims.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 37, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
The majority of people works in the some job throughout his life, on the other h...
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Line 2, column 180, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comes'?
Suggestion: comes
...uch money. As a consiquence the work it come becomes a part of life moreover your in...
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Line 3, column 11, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
... working other organization. Secondly, most of people wanted working different organizations ...
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Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...the work as a metter of facting working a lots of organizations this is very useless s...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 65, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ked different organizations an usefull. However i did not believe and through i realied...
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Line 4, column 73, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...erent organizations an usefull. However i did not believe and through i realied t...
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Line 4, column 290, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the organizations') or simply say ''most organizations''.
Suggestion: most of the organizations; most organizations
...to hundered degree thus you working the most of organizations. Therafore studying very much and you m...
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Line 4, column 379, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ch and you must achievement to aims and dont stop their achievement. In conclusion...
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Line 5, column 47, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...clusion, the majority of people working a lots of organizations and this view truth. W...
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Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...ations and this view truth. Working the some organization it is very dull in my opin...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1212.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90688259109 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86900885123 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502024291498 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.7566967562 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.666666667 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4444444444 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.8888888889 7.06120827912 225% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355483706561 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179308853796 0.084324248473 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889671356233 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226238987797 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714671586812 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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