In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Amount of people is growing who suffer from health problems because of eating so much fast food. Why government load a higher levy to that people on this type of meal? In this problem has not only advantages but also drawbacks.Firstly, disadvantages are that government does not have licence for what people eat and each person may take food what he or she wants. On the other hand, if government impose an upper levy,population are in a difficulty from lack of money also. Gradually, it leads to poverty.
Secondly, if people take very much fast food, their health become bad. Because, there are not any vitamins which are needful to each person. That sort of dish is not nutritious and it can not give calorie.Eating more and every day that food brings to become fat. As a result of it appears problems with health.In order to reduce illness authority have to load a higher tax. This is good in other side, because elevated fee decrease having fast food and other problems. In fact, such countries mostly are in Europe, America, especially,urban areas. For the reason that in there restaurants are developing.There are lots of ill individuals with fatting who are inhabitants of city .
In conclusion,the best solution to this problem is increasing cost of fast food and less it should be prepared in restaurants. From my point of view if it happens,people will buy less than before. Then they will not be dissatisfied with anyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, in fact, sort of, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85714285714 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97696446127 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620408163265 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9612913316 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3333333333 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381410895071 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102914315775 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764954285798 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235022088634 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07210287264 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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