In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
Nowadays in certain countries people are impacting with many heath issues due to extreme consumption of fast food. Some people argue that the government should bring this in control and increase the tax on such food item. However, I can not completely agree with this statement as I think it is not a good way to tackle this problem.
On the one hand, eating too much junk food leads to some kind of common disease such as obesity. Nevertheless, knowledge about private health is related to the citizens and they need control their own state of health. The government can aid to people with impart information to education about the amount of junk food they can eat and how effects will be from this kind of food. It will be more better than increasing the tax and also it will grow burden to middle and lower class of society. Therefore, it can be affected more than half population of country.
On the other hand, fast food consists varied kind of harmful to peoples' health ingridients. Therefore, it should be prohibited by the government and this solution should help to delete the problem. For instance, most of inhabitants who live in a large megapolises do not have enough time to eat meal fully. It will be easier to go to the fast food cafe and do not waste time what to choose and wait until their food will be ready.
In conclusion, I absolutely disagree that imposing tax it is a good way to resolve this issue. Moreover, it would put economical problems to the poor and middle class of state.
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Suggestion: better
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, for instance, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1239.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58888888889 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49020302608 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548148148148 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.1043326628 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.5 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379743617192 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118377473606 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727695981806 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212633210949 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675674854527 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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