Society would benefit from a complete ban on all forms of advertisement. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often suggested that complete disallow of the advertisement would be beneficial for the community. I strongly disagree with this point of view, as I believed that it will effect most of the businesses as their majority of the sales increased due to the advertisement. Also, advertisement industries contribute to our economy and job market.
Firstly of all, all kind of advertisements are beneficial in order to generate sales and profit for majority of the businesses. Also, Advertisement is the optimal way to introduce the products and services in the competitive market. For example, when any new products or services are introduce in the market and they needs to be reach to the target market and buyers. On the other side, it is also true that some businesses mislead the customers through the advertisement and hide the disadvantages of the products.
Furthermore, advertisement world plays important role to boost the economy and generate several job opportunities for the young people. When our society do not have such medium of advertisement in the past, businesses were unable to reach at large scale of the market. However, these days some businesses are able to market their products and services in the international level. Moreover, many student in the society choose their career in the advertisement media because there is huge demand of skilled worker in this field.
In conclusion, advertisement has great impact on the business’s overall growth and contribute in our economy as well. In my opinion, advertisement should not banned in view of the aforementioned advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 178, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...int of view, as I believed that it will effect most of the businesses as their majorit...
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Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'introduced'.
Suggestion: introduced
..., when any new products or services are introduce in the market and they needs to be reac...
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Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'need'
Suggestion: need
...es are introduce in the market and they needs to be reach to the target market and bu...
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Line 5, column 391, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun student seems to be countable; consider using: 'many students'.
Suggestion: many students
...s in the international level. Moreover, many student in the society choose their career in t...
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Line 7, column 159, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'ban'
Suggestion: ban
...In my opinion, advertisement should not banned in view of the aforementioned advantage...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, moreover, so, well, for example, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27626459144 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1857892001 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540856031128 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.1334897635 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.307692308 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159964248526 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594792753551 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423232509282 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994647385458 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.014269052947 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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