Some people believe hat unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
High school is the period when teenagers develop and shape their personality the most as individuals, that’s why this time should be spent in a productive way.
In my opinion, unpaid community service is extremely important for young people because it teaches them about giving to others without expecting anything in return.
On the one hand, volunteering in different organizations helps the younger generation to be closer to the community they live in but it also gives them a new perspective to the real world and some of the issues they will face through their lives. For example, some teenagers that live in selective areas have never experienced seeing poverty so by doing charity work they can understand the needs of those less fortunate than them.
On the other hand, teenagers should have the right of choosing whether they want to participate in community services or not. If high schoolers know that something is mandatory and they can’t take the decision on their own they might feel pressured and not reach their maximum potential while they are doing volunteer work. For instance, people’s teen years are the times where they want to show their autonomy so by being obligated to do something there is a big probability that they will find it unappealing. Furthermore when kids are in high school they are already at the age where they should know what’s good for them and their civic spirit should be developed.
In conclusion, community service has a big importance and impact on young people and it should be a part of everyone’s life but only if they are aware that this is the right path to give back to the society they live in.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 139, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a productive way" with adverb for "productive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...s, that’s why this time should be spent in a productive way. In my opinion, unpaid community ser...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 193, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...a new perspective to the real world and some of the issues they will face through their liv...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 512, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...ity that they will find it unappealing. Furthermore when kids are in highschool they are al...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94306049822 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69199146533 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583629893238 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.4505370956 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.333333333 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2222222222 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5555555556 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201537281818 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963118432819 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432247086743 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121433068377 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450830688425 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 139, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a productive way" with adverb for "productive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...s, that’s why this time should be spent in a productive way. In my opinion, unpaid community ser...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 193, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...a new perspective to the real world and some of the issues they will face through their liv...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 512, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...ity that they will find it unappealing. Furthermore when kids are in highschool they are al...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94306049822 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69199146533 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583629893238 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.4505370956 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.333333333 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2222222222 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5555555556 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201537281818 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963118432819 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432247086743 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121433068377 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450830688425 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.