In surveys Mason City residents rank water sports (swimming, boating and fishing) among their favorite recreational activities. The Mason River flowing through the city is rarely used for these pursuits, however, and the city park department devotes little of its budget to maintaining riverside recreational facilities. For years there have been complaints from residents about the quality of the river's water and the river's smell. In response, the state has recently announced plans to clean up Mason River. Use of the river for water sports is therefore sure to increase. The city government should for that reason devote more money in this year's budget to riverside recreational facilities.
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on the assumptions and what the implications are if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
Form the above argument author describing that this year city government has planned to devote more money in this year's budget to riverside recreational facilities.As for years there have been complaints rom residents about the quality of the river's water and the rivers' smell.aiuthor assuming that they will be increase in the water sports in they clean this river.Firstly the city park department devotes spending little of its budget to maintaining riverside recreational facilities. how much money they are using for recreational facilities? secondly we have to for what reason the water getting smell and reducing the quality of the water? what are different plans the state announced and how much budget will it take ?
Firstly, state government has to identify what is the reason behind the water quality and smell. if the are complaining means its will be bad quality and smell. assume that because of rank water sports only water was been affected .then author government has to stop rank sports in that case author statement cont holds water.and the state has to know did they are cleaning the river everyday? if it not happen that may be one of the reason behind the quality and smell of the water.
the river is flowing through the city state has to know whether the people in the site are polluting the river? pollution may effect quality and smell of the water.state has to know there are any industries near to the river so it might affect.if the government is going to realise funds without knowing the exact reason behind the river smell and quality. the funds will be wasted. assume there is a industry near by the river and they are releasing all the dust in the river then government has to stop the industry near the river rather than realising the funds.
in the conclusion there will be many reasons behind the quality of the river and the smell they has to find the reason behind it. people in the city will also be the reason. author has to come with more evidence to prove the argument.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 15 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 9 2
No. of Sentences: 6 15
No. of Words: 351 350
No. of Characters: 1643 1500
No. of Different Words: 141 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.328 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.681 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.344 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 101 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 68 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 46 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 32 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 58.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 28.605 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.833 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.559 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.845 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.295 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 110, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ent has planned to devote more money in this years budget to riverside recreational ...
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Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: As
...et to riverside recreational facilities.As for years there have been complaints ro...
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Line 1, column 367, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Firstly
...e water sports in they clean this river.Firstly the city park department devotes spendi...
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Line 1, column 488, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: How
...ning riverside recreational facilities. how much money they are using for recreatio...
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Line 1, column 547, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
... are using for recreational facilities? secondly we have to for what reason the water ge...
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Line 1, column 646, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: What
... and reducing the quality of the water? what are different plans the state announced...
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Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...l it take ? Firstly, state government has to identify what is the reason behin...
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Suggestion: If
...son behind the water quality and smell. if the are complaining means its will be b...
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Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
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... behind the water quality and smell. if the are complaining means its will be bad quali...
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Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...and smell. if the are complaining means its will be bad quality and smell. assume t...
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Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Assume
...eans its will be bad quality and smell. assume that because of rank water sports only ...
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Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: WAS_BEEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'was' or 'has been'?
Suggestion: was; has been
...because of rank water sports only water was been affected .then author government has to...
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Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...ater sports only water was been affected .then author government has to stop rank ...
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Line 3, column 386, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...to know did they are cleaning the river everyday? if it not happen that may be one of th...
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Line 3, column 396, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...d they are cleaning the river everyday? if it not happen that may be one of the re...
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Line 3, column 406, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'happens'?
Suggestion: happens
... cleaning the river everyday? if it not happen that may be one of the reason behind th...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: The
... the quality and smell of the water. the river is flowing through the city stat...
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Line 5, column 21, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ll of the water. the river is flowing through the city state has to know wheth...
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Line 5, column 114, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Pollution
...le in the site are polluting the river? pollution may effect quality and smell of the wat...
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Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
... are polluting the river? pollution may effect quality and smell of the water.state ha...
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Line 5, column 359, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: The
...son behind the river smell and quality. the funds will be wasted. assume there is a...
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Line 5, column 385, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Assume
... and quality. the funds will be wasted. assume there is a industry near by the river a...
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Line 5, column 401, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e funds will be wasted. assume there is a industry near by the river and they are...
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Line 5, column 412, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...l be wasted. assume there is a industry near by the river and they are releasing all th...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: In
...er rather than realising the funds. in the conclusion there will be many reaso...
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Line 7, column 97, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...quality of the river and the smell they has to find the reason behind it. people i...
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Line 7, column 137, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...has to find the reason behind it. people in the city will also be the reason. aut...
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Line 7, column 176, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Author
...e in the city will also be the reason. author has to come with more evidence to prove...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, as for, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.6327345309 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 13.6137724551 37% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 28.8173652695 73% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 55.5748502994 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 16.3942115768 67% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 2260.96107784 74% => OK
No of words: 349.0 441.139720559 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79083094556 5.12650576532 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44648852898 2.78398813304 88% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 204.123752495 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.43553008596 0.468620217663 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 516.6 705.55239521 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 19.7664670659 76% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.8473053892 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 113.254992532 57.8364921388 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.466666667 119.503703932 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2666666667 23.324526521 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.70786347227 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 28.0 5.25449101796 533% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.20758483034 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.67664670659 192% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192191691728 0.218282227539 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657727833536 0.0743258471296 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691494601768 0.0701772020484 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117967569187 0.128457276422 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593864625544 0.0628817314937 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.3799401198 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.3550499002 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.197005988 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.5979740519 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.32208582834 89% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 98.500998004 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 12.3882235529 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.1389221557 101% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.