You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
In some countries children have very strict rules of behaviour, while in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want.
To what extent should children have to follow rules?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
As they say, children are the building blocks for any successful society, their upbringing becomes paramount for their growth and eventually country's growth. As many would argue that the correct way of the upbringing is only strict discipline, others may refute them blatantly. The way I see this concept is, there should be a natural balance to it. The following essay would highlight some of those vies here.
To begin with, Statistics results clearly show that the children in Nations with strict rules and regulations tend to be more successful in their later years. With years of strict conditioning do make them realize the value of time, hard work, and efforts which transform these young offsprings into a successful and confident individual. For example - children from strict countries like Asian countries have shown tremendous success rates in recent years overtaking many non asian counterparts.
Having said that, Unarguably the kids under no strict regulations flourish more as they have the flexibility and freedom to try different things with no rules and regulations. This concept gives kids relatively more creative freedom, many chances of trials, chances of falling and failing, learning from them a nd moving on. This creative aspect makes them strong, smart and successful youth , not afraid to make mistakes and lead lives progressively. Recent research shows kids under less stressful environment tend to flourish more. For example - many european countries try to implement much softer approach towards kids and those kids tend to grow
as successful and happy individuals.
To conclude, for the debate of raising kids , both the above mentioned factors have pros and cons attached to them. Hence it is worth mentioning that striking a proper balance between strict and non strict ways is the idle way of raising happy and successful kids.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, so, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30976430976 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66113993718 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602693602694 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8106711458 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.642857143 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174187242322 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572300425822 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042887239701 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826981919296 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535264757731 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.