You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:
There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
You should write at least 250 words.
Any country around the globe gets uniquely recognized by a myriad of its facets like its culture, tradition, cuisine, attire, music et el. This brings Music to the frontline while understanding any country's intrinsic values, which also brings its own authenticity and cultural reference to the world making World a pure symphony. How music is an integral part of our lives, this essay would discuss them in detail.
Historically, most of the countries thrive on their music where every life occasion be it death , birth , wedding, etc promises its own share of music in form of songs ,dance, poems, poetries ,stories etc. Especially, In countries like India where music is part of every days's life-impacting every social event and occasion is almost as normal as breathing. For example - Bollywood, the second-largest movie manufacturing Industry in the world makes movies full of songs and dance to an extent of even drawing the criticism from many sectors. But People just love music as they relate to it at all level. for example - some people listen to it as it relieves them where as for some, its their passion.These days, more and more people are making their carriers out of music as this is liked by kids, adults and elderly alike and minting lots of money due to its popularity.
Additionaly, As music world is a myriad of all kids like hiphop, , Jazz, classical, folk etc, everyone gets what they want. Which brings to an important discussion about saving our culture and traditions. In these times when everyone has access to the world music, it become paramount to save our traditional music. We need to make sure we save our heritage music and make it alive for the future generations so that it never dies out. As trasitional music is the soul of any country , reviving becomes even more neccesary when todays youth is mindlessly following international music.
To conclude, saving our heritage and traditional music is just non negotiable and everyone should try to revive it making it accesible to our future generations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, then, while, as for, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98826979472 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72986578366 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577712609971 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4064125172 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.5 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3571428571 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21428571429 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198392758095 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078174880736 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344041707283 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125436003877 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462821096634 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.