resent a written argument or case to an educated reader with no special knowledge of the following topic:
News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Television and newspapers are playing a vital role in everybody's lives, keeping them updated with every events occuring worldwide. But ,which content should publish? is completely depends upon the professionals who edit news. However, there are many factors that impact the decision of publisher to broadcast a particular event.In the following paragraphs, I will explain those factors and will discuss the given questions .
To commence with, there are numerous causitive factors which persuade the reporters to publish the specific event in front of public.
Nowadays, spectators are more interested in those news which create suspense and linked to famous celebrities lives. For example, a survey showed that majority of people explore internet for getting information related to famous person globally rather than about the important happening . That is why, films, politics or sports related news are more prevalent on news channels these days ,that not only increases the viewership but also profits the company.
Moving further, individuals have become habitual of listening unappropriate entertainement related news.More preference to entertainment lacks the essential knowledge about global issues, making minds more dump and lazy.So, publishing good news on newspapers and televisions are indispensable to make people aware about current situations, leading to development of individual , as it will enhance their intellectual level and make them proactive. Further , they can opine and particiapte for progression of country by giving their ideas and views.
To conclude, undoubtedly, Television and newspapers are forced to broadcast those news which can enhance their publicity only, without considering the bad impact on people. However, it is necessary to publish good news which can impact people lives in good ways , only be done by establishing some regulation by authorities on news editors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'those newses'?
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Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'those newses'?
Suggestion: this news; those newses
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75618374558 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94377080541 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65371024735 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 99.1100678819 49.4020404114 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 135.75 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116614453467 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0405107475441 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0298097682948 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0642333192201 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237732909142 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.42 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.58 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ith every events occuring worldwide. But ,which content should publish? is complet...
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Line 1, column 167, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Is
...ide. But ,which content should publish? is completely depends upon the professiona...
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Line 1, column 329, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...blisher to broadcast a particular event.In the following paragraphs, I will explai...
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...ors and will discuss the given questions . To commence with, there are numerous c...
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Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'those newses'?
Suggestion: this news; those newses
...days, spectators are more interested in those news which create suspense and linked to fam...
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Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: FAMOUS_CELEBRITY[1]
Message: Use simply 'celebrities'.
Suggestion: celebrities
...ews which create suspense and linked to famous celebrities lives. For example, a survey showed tha...
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Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...ather than about the important happening . That is why, films, politics or sports ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...re prevalent on news channels these days ,that not only increases the viewership b...
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Line 4, column 76, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...come habitual of listening unappropriate entertainement related news.More prefere...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: More
...ppropriate entertainement related news.More preference to entertainment lacks the e...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...issues, making minds more dump and lazy.So, publishing good news on newspapers and...
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Line 4, column 377, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ns, leading to development of individual , as it will enhance their intellectual l...
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Line 4, column 456, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...l level and make them proactive. Further , they can opine and particiapte for prog...
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Line 4, column 519, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...articiapte for progression of country by giving their ideas and views. To conclu...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...as and views. To conclude, undoubtedly, Television and newspapers are forced to ...
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Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'those newses'?
Suggestion: this news; those newses
... and newspapers are forced to broadcast those news which can enhance their publicity only,...
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Line 5, column 262, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ich can impact people lives in good ways , only be done by establishing some regul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75618374558 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94377080541 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65371024735 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 99.1100678819 49.4020404114 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 135.75 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116614453467 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0405107475441 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0298097682948 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0642333192201 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237732909142 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.42 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.58 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.