Some people think that children should aim to do their best at whatever they are doing . Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
While some people believe that children should put 100% effort into doing everything, no matter what activity they are doing. Others argue that it is unnecessary to put pressure on children’s childhood. I agree with the view that children should do their best in every subject of life.
On the one hand, childhood is the time for children to fun, play and experience anything around their world. Also, it has an important role to play in their growing up healthily. At this time, the child should do everything they want to do, such as listen to music, play games, read books without the pressure of the need to do well everything. In this way, they can easily gain more knowledge and also develop the most comprehensively.
On the other hand, children should aim to be extremely good at studying or leisure activities. This is because when they become master in studies, they will get more opportunities to get success in their later life. Furthermore, when they trying their hardest at school, they can pass the exam with flying colours and will give more respect from other students around them. Languages, for example, when become excel in their study language, they will get more scholarships which is the best way to study abroad without any expensive fee. Hence, children can make more friends or even expose to many different jobs. When they growing up they will have more choices to choose the best career.
In conclusion, there are convincing arguments both for and against doing best at everything in life but I believe that the best way to success is to focus 100% on doing something.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 595, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...can make more friends or even expose to many different jobs. When they growing up they will ha...
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Line 4, column 616, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... or even expose to many different jobs. When they growing up they will have more cho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51786082628 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570909090909 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3152592304 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0714285714 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352604164717 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121674552259 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078748455289 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22281003247 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582008886192 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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