It is undeniable fact that increasing technical advancement is creating a new world which no one could imagine in previous era. Although, it has brought flexibility comfort and Recreation but it has also increased the demand in people to get things complete as quickly as possible. Now this essay will evaluate the reasons behind this issue and its positive consequences in upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, in this fast paced world, every individual seems to be running to keep up their goals. Moreover, having latest technologies since past few decades has automated myraids of activities which influence people to achieve things immediately. For an example, despite being not satisfied, certain masses often do show off in the society so they want to receive response promptly of any particular task. Additionally, having busy in their hectic schedule, people don't prefer to waste their time in waiting for anything because in numerous situations, wasting time can ruin several things.
Furthermore, this mindset is majorly a positive development and beneficial to the society. Getting multiple things done in short time period, is lead to increasing in productivity along with this after obtaining result immediately, people not become only expert but also improve their quality status of life in present scenario. For instance, a recent survey has revealed that the employees who complete their work as much as possible are being treated with respect than others in business sectors, apart from this, they have less stress and peaceful life.
To conclude, despite having positive trend, it has some drawbacks too which cannot be neglected that indirectly lead people to lose their cultural and ethical values.
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- Families who do not send their children to government financed schools should not be required to pay taxes that support universal education To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 81
- Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed However some people think that zoos are useful for protecting rare animals Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together Do you agree or disagree 67
- As compared to the past children these days spend more of their leisure time indoors with computers and TV and less time outdoors Describe some of the problems this lack of outdoor leisure time can cause and suggest at least one possible solution 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: having the latest
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Suggestion: don't
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, apart from, for instance, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38376383764 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70490024622 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690036900369 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.269076158 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.636363636 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6363636364 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161538621194 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614924518576 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402727778999 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0915540112262 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277168466606 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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