Happiness is considered very important in life.
Why is it difficult to define?
What factors are important in achieving happiness?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge
or experience
Happiness is one of the most important and most desirable aspects of life. The definition of happiness varies from person to person and there is no unique definition for it. There are several factors which are responsible for achieving happiness. These will be discussed in this essay.
Happiness can be considered satisfaction in life with less worries and less personal problems. However, it is not that easy to define it because different people sense differently for the same situation. Furthermore, it is short-lived and people starts to feel bored even they are content with everything and ...
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and people starts to feel bored
and people start to feel bored
The first one is we should compare
The first one is that we should compare
The second important thing to achieve happiness is we shouldn't worry
The second important thing to achieve happiness is that we shouldn't worry
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