Men are placed in most high level job Some people say that the government should encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for women Do you agree or disagree

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Men are placed in most high level job. Some people say that the government should encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for women. Do you agree or disagree.

It is irrefutable to say that from last some decades roles of women considered as important as men when it comes to doing job and earning money. Therefore, it is believed by some members of society that higher authorities must reserve some seats in most high-level jobs for females. However, I disagree with the given statement I think seats in these jobs should be given to the capable candidate without considering about gender.

To commence with, there are many reasons that why reserving seats for women is not reliable. Firstly, the profit and progress of larger companies are totally depend on employees of company. If they hire the people at high position of handling the staff by noticing the abilities and capabilities of a person definitely business of that company boost. Secondly, sometimes when they reserve seats for females take high position without having interest and experience may lead to destroy the progress of a business.

In addition, reserving seats for women can also some other drawbacks. For example, talented men may not get chance to take position in a job owing to the limitation of seats. Moreover, these high position only should be given those people who are enough confident and have all the abilities to take this job. It can be by taking interviews, written exam and group discussions rather than thinking about gender.

To recapitulate, it is clear from the above discussion that doing high level jobs required a lot of skills to maintain the business. I think it would be wrong to say that government should reserve some jobs for women because prosperity of a job is totally depend on the capabilities. So there should not be any kind of gender discriminate while hiring candidate.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
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Line 7, column 257, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
... because prosperity of a job is totally depend on the capabilities. So there should no...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, in addition, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98615916955 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68863698045 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553633217993 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7475775038 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.928571429 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.421416729646 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137372179952 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0936388913655 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265480580781 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105802516715 0.056905535591 186% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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