Food is the daily need of all living things including humans. Humans can satisfy their food need either by cooking the food or by buying it from other humans. Traditionally people cooks their meal as per the need. Recently the trend of people purchasing the food from outside is growing. So the question arises "Which method is better for people"?
The traditional way is to cook our own food. Family members collects all the required ingredients to cook their food and prepare the food for whole family. Since all the ingredients are bought by the family members and no profit involved in the food preparation, the end product usually is a healthy dish. Made with the best ingredients such as oil, fresh vegetables and no preservatives. Along with its above advantages, the homemade food is cheaper as well compare to the food from resturants and food stalls.
I belive the major factor which influencing the food purchasing trend is that nowadays all the members of the family are doing jobs or somehow involved in the other life issues. The time required to prepare meal is a luxury which only few families can afford. On the other hand food companies noticed the problem and come up with some easy solutions to fill the need. These solutions includes purchasing ready to cook food from the stores or purchasing food from resturants or hotels. Some companies even adopted few excellent marketing tricks to grab the customers by using ads or home delivery or you can just take your meal while driving to the office. The vast varities of food available in the market also influence the customers. Since all of these solutions include the profit and man power to handle it, the food is costire than the homemade food. Apart from the cost of the food some times the companies uses cheap methods to reduce the cost and ended up with the less healthy food.
Overall we can say that the trend to purchase food from the outside is depends on the "Time available". On the special occassions some families still like to cook their own food like Thanksgiving.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, well, while, apart from, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84550561798 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57057159813 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502808988764 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6812275574 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.25 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222838110895 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080946504082 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545573179652 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150880828379 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282401292577 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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