Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks.
Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?
Telecommunication technology has become the essential part of human life, while, other think that fraud has risen after coming it. In my opinion the benefits of social media is highest than negative impact.
To begin with, There are several merits of using this technology. Firstly, it makes person'life more convenient and easy. Since company creates numerous website for employe, it can be easily operated by worker at home without going office which save their money and time. Secondly, multifarious money transfer relative website are cooperated by Government and private organisation with strong security function which can assist to common man to transfer their money one account to another account without enter the bank, Paytem is the best example for online payment which is used by all age group. Hence, it provides fast pace to today generation.
On the other hand, Although it is most efficient way to surveying in the world, we cannot ignore the harmful influence of it. Despite of strong cyber system on the website, every year many complaine sign against of internet money thread. To explain hacker try to develope same website as look like original website. Eventually, if individual login on that page and fill all banking detail, they hack your all account record and withdraw your money. For example, Last year thousand F.I.R fill against dublecate State bank of india' s website which fraud millions of rupees . Thus, online payment system is not save for people.
In the conclusion, In spite of all age categories depend on smart media, they have need to take precaution before selecting any website
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, in my opinion, in spite of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14015151515 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51294689566 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.693181818182 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.5363377475 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9285714286 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0714285714 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134673753799 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395366913786 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597905449242 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099098431188 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623378936629 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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