Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks.
Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages
Telecommunication technology has become the essential part of human life, while, other think that fraud has risen after coming it. In my opinion the benefits of social media is highest than negative impact.
To begin with, There are several merits of using this technology. Firstly, it makes person's life more convenient and easy. Since company creates many website for employe, it can be easily operated by worker at home without going office which save their money and time. Secondly, multifarious money transfer relative website are cooperated by Government and private organisation with strong security function which can aid to average person to transfer their money one account to another account without enter the bank, Paytam is the best example for online payment which is used by all age group. Hence, it provides fast pace to today generation.
On the other hand, Although it is most efficient way to surveying in the world, we cannot ignore the harmful influence of it. Despite of strong cyber system on the website, every year many complain sign against of internet money thread. To explain hacker try to develope same website as look like original website. Eventually, if individual login on that page and fill all banking detail, they hack your all account record and withdraw your money. For example, Last year thousand F.I.R fill against duplicate State bank of india' s website which fraud millions of rupees . Thus, online payment system is not save for people.
In the conclusion, In spite of all age categories depend on smart media, they have need to take precaution before selecting any website
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, in my opinion, in spite of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98867924528 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42214183997 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649056603774 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 265.0 20.2975951904 1306% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1322.0 106.682146367 1239% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 265.0 20.7667163134 1276% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 141.0 7.06120827912 1997% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155037224373 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155037224373 0.084324248473 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108132590612 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551796404927 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 134.6 13.0946893788 1028% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -197.5 50.2224549098 -393% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 106.6 11.3001002004 943% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.14 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.71 8.58950901804 241% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 9.78957915832 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 108.0 10.1190380762 1067% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 59.0 10.7795591182 547% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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