There have been many inventions in the human history, such as the wheel. Some
people think the most important thing is the internet.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Although there have been many important innovations throughout the history, including the mass number of technological advances, it is still believed that the advent of the Internet has the most significant effect on human life. From my perspective, I totally agree with this opinion. From the first time it developed, Internet has entirely changed our life at all aspects.
Firstly, Internet provides us an entirely new method of accessing news. As whole libraries are being made available online, nowadays, only with a smartphone, a computer or a PC with Internet connection, people can find out their needed information within a blink of an eye. Internet enables people to access more information than ever before due to its speed and convenience.
Secondly, internet is not only marketed as a practice tool for searching but also be used as a mean of entertaining and communicating. Internet made up a new world where our favorite films can be downloaded in a minute, and music with high standards is always available. Besides, with instant messaging and social networking, it is much cheaper and more convenient to communicate with others via the internet.
Finally, internet has gradually changed the way people work as more and more companies allow their employees to stay at home and work through emails, and online meetings have more chances to show its advantages in modern days such as saving money or even optimizing time use.
In conclusion, despite of some negative effects have been learned, Internet still hold the position of the most influence invention with all its potential.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 267, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ded information within a blink of an eye Internet enables people to access more i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07722007722 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74221530631 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637065637066 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 259.0 20.2975951904 1276% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1315.0 106.682146367 1233% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 259.0 20.7667163134 1247% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 100.0 7.06120827912 1416% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255948645214 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.255948645214 0.084324248473 304% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138474991311 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693337389979 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 132.0 13.0946893788 1008% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -191.41 50.2224549098 -381% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 104.3 11.3001002004 923% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.66 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.87 8.58950901804 243% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 9.78957915832 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 105.6 10.1190380762 1044% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 59.0 10.7795591182 547% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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