Getting married late. How has this affected people ? Is it a positive or negative trend ?
In recent years, there has been a growing tendency that more and more young people continue a single lifestyle instead of getting married soon. In my opinion, this could be seen as a positive development for the following reasons.
Firstly, one of the significant reasons is that people can have a great amount of time to concentrate on developing their career completely. It is obvious that a secure occupation leads to stable finance and helps people become strong enough to properly take charge of the new responsibilities. For example, most family problems and internal disputes are caused by the monetary crisis, which is the most serious threat to any marriage. As a result, in order to take any new relationship to the next stage, they need to be financially comfortable and well-established in their professions.
Moreover, the greater threat to a young marriage is that one of them may have the thought : “The grass is always greener on the other side of the fence” . This is especially dangerous when a person who married his or her first love begins to fantasize about what he or she has missed. The temptation to have an affair can be overwhelming and very damaging. For instance, as can be seen that the divorce rate among young people is almost higher than that of married couples later.
To conclude, as per my perspective, postponing the age of marriage is a good move. People in the more mature age group will have a more perfect vision of how to cultivate a family as well as a stable career to support their family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68045112782 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68977803428 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575187969925 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 266.0 20.2975951904 1311% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1245.0 106.682146367 1167% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 266.0 20.7667163134 1281% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 110.0 7.06120827912 1558% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147013996586 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147013996586 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0903928444824 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538361898657 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 133.6 13.0946893788 1020% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -190.05 50.2224549098 -378% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 105.9 11.3001002004 937% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.34 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.39 8.58950901804 237% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 9.78957915832 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 108.4 10.1190380762 1071% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 59.0 10.7795591182 547% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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