In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, the biggest challenge that humankind confronted is eating too much fast food and consequence of that increasing numbers of people are suffering health problems. Governments should adress this fundamental threat against our health, throughly, from every aspects and certainly, impose higher tax regulations on fast food companies.
One the one hand, modern lifestyle is encoraging people to consume everything in a fast given format. People who are working many hours in their job are not able to cook food when they arrived to house, therefore, ready to eat food gains devastating popularity. For Instance, a current research points out that in U.S, only 25% of the population is cooking everyday namely healty food. In addition, The carbohydrates in junk food creates hungry cells and gradually people become more addicted.
One the other hand, serious action against fast food companies is an urgent responsibility of everyone but most governments and there are various things to point out. Most importanly, discouraging the fast-food companies with higher taxes so that they will raise the quality of the ingredients is one of the biggest part of the solution. Meanwhile, raising awareness against bad eating habits can be implemented by the media channels. To sum up, Health autorities has to have a holistic approach to react both economically and socially.
In conclusion, I definitely agree that there is a strong correlation in between eating fast food and health disparities. Standing against this problem is our duty in the beginning, however, governments have the biggest role to play in order to protect health of the populations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, while, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36781609195 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91709554629 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63601532567 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6071500373 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 116.75 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354697130296 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118669219654 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813370045311 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216847756087 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0965674044254 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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