In the recent years the crime has increased around the globe there are distinct opinions for the crime when GROUP says that nothing can be done to prevent them
According to the few people we should take some step against a crime firstly because if you will not take any action against them we will get more and more power of doing this second time secondly we can’t sit at home all the day by getting a scared of crying we have to step out of our homes for a walk and many other things so for that we have to take action thirdly we will take some action against it it will set an example for the others who are engaged in this work And they will not do it second time
While on the flipside there are many who says there anything against the crime because due to the increasing pace of life the one does not have a time to report this issue in this hectic life And no one want to waste the time in doing such things
Secondly if we complain about the crime they how to visit a reporting centre like police station caught several times whenever there is a need no one Hayes a time in this in his life for doing such things next if you will complain about the criminals they will target them and no one want to take their lives at risk
Call by my point of view Strongly believe that one should take a step against a crime if all the people we text DIPAK is the crime the crime will totally diminish from the society and one can leave a happy life
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...nions for the crime when GROUP says that nothing can be done to prevent them A...
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...hirdly we will take some action against it it will set an example for the others who ...
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... others who are engaged in this work And they will not do it second time While o...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t to waste the time in doing such things Secondly if we complain about the crime ...
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Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'the crime'.
Suggestion: the crime
...rime if all the people we text DIPAK is the crime the crime will totally diminish from the society ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1174.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.11929824561 5.12529762239 80% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.84352493331 2.80592935109 66% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480701754386 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 285.0 20.2975951904 1404% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1174.0 106.682146367 1100% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 285.0 20.7667163134 1372% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 63.0 7.06120827912 892% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111692947466 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111692947466 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.064640816923 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550674693447 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 140.5 13.0946893788 1073% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -192.42 50.2224549098 -383% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 110.9 11.3001002004 981% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 8.1 12.4159519038 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 19.43 8.58950901804 226% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 30.0 78.4519038076 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 51.0 9.78957915832 521% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 116.0 10.1190380762 1146% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 111.0 10.7795591182 1030% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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