Few individuals believe that the exchange of information between executives and their employees is crucial for the success of a firm. Others, on contrary, perceive that other aspects like job satisfaction is rather vital. According to my opinion, none of them are solely responsible for the success of a corporation as both are equally important. This essay briefly analyses both the cases and in furtherance provides reasons to justify my opinion.
To begin with, for any institution to triumph, the existence of communication is a basic necessity. This helps in identifying the prevailing flaws and possible alterations to be made to improve working conditions. Consequently, the output will be amplified to a great extent, pushing the company to higher levels. For example, as a way of communication, almost every firm takes feedback from its employees regarding various components for better performance. In other words, it would establish an organized and efficient environment.
On the other hand, factors like job satisfaction of the staff members constitute the progression of any institution. As this generates a sense of loyalty in them, they would strive to put forth extra efforts and push their limits. Thus, it would not only improve individual performances, but also the output of the firm as a whole. As an illustration, many workplaces provide bonuses and perks to their employees in order to make them satisfied with their job. As a whole, the workers strive for the betterment of the organization.
To conclude, communication is vital in any firm. Nevertheless, it is not the only factor contributing to success as other aspects like employee satisfaction are also essential.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 373, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'takes'' or 'take's'?
Suggestion: takes'; take's
...way of communication, almost every firm takes feedback from its employees regarding v...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, consequently, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, thus, for example, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33457249071 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18067053534 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583643122677 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.7474746186 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.6875 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8125 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5625 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125597210629 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420914037398 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395383967889 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873187609697 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406345104591 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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