The internet allows us to stay connected with each other no matter where we are. On the other hand, it also isolates us and encourages people not to socialize.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with these statements?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Internet technology provides enormous facilities to people who live all over the world. Though the internet facilitates humans in many aspects, it separates people and not persuades them in social activities. This essay agrees with these statements and will give reasons for the same.
Internet technology has been utilized by a wide range of individuals to communicate with their friends and relatives no matter where they are. It is also used to interconnect in various domains such as Finance, Education, Information Technology, Health Centers, Banking, Railways, Aircraft, and so on. For example, in the education sector students can sit in their homes and attend online classes. Furthermore, they can access and download their study materials from wherever they live. Nowadays IT field folks doing their work from home by using the Internet technology due to the covid-19 situation. In short, the Internet offers huge provisions to people who are working in different organizations.
Even though, Internet technology presents a number of services to the public it also detaches them from each other. Today, most people sit with their gadgets and spent more time on social media. This often results that not allow them to mingle physically. This situation leads them not to participate in any group events. For example, at my friends’ get-together party all of them having their mobile phones and spent time on social media apps. They have not even chatted with our friends during the party. In short, people always used their Internet gadgets and not even talk with their fellow peers physically.
In conclusion, the Internet eases the public to keep in touch with each other around the world. However, it disconnects us and not permits us to socialize with everyone really. This essay discussed the reasons and provided examples that how the Internet enables us to connect with everyone virtually and not physically.
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- One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 73
- Now a days technologies is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing For example through cellphone tracking and security cameras In many cases people being monitored are unaware that this is happening Do you think the advantages 86
- Some people work for the same organization all their working life Others think it is better to work for different organizations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 67
- The internet allows us to stay connected with each other no matter where we are On the other hand it also isolates us and encourages people not to socialize To what extent do you agree or disagree with these statements Give reasons for your answer and inc 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'fields'?
Suggestion: fields
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, really, so, for example, in conclusion, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27922077922 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64465939379 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581168831169 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6562796864 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.5789473684 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2105263158 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68421052632 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280820756622 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849785687813 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690331515154 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182324074164 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722934914264 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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