One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing.
Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, many advanced technologies have been using in the medical field. People are living longer and their expectancy of life is also being increased due to the continuous improvement in the health care department. This essay will discuss the positive and negative aspects of medical care improvement as well as why the advantages of improved medical care do in fact outweigh the disadvantages.
In this fast-paced world, the medical field has reached its spikes with a plethora of developments. A few decades ago, enormous people have died due to threatening diseases like smallpox, polio, flu, and so on. All these dangerous illnesses have completely disappeared because of the vaccinations. In addition to this, many developed treatments are available to cure such critical diseases as brain tumors, heart attacks, kidney failure, and so on. For example, some significant treatments such as angiograms and kidney transplantation are available to all people. To recapitulate, the progressive improvements in the health care arena impact the positive thoughts among the people about their life anticipation.
On the other hand, some drawbacks are also there in the healthcare developments. Many people often go to the hospital even for small sicknesses. If they have taken treatment like this, their body will lose immunity power gradually. Furthermore, people totally forget about their health care and natural food habits due to the strong belief in medical care developments. A recent study says that 89% of people have been taking treatment for heart-related illnesses due to their modern life practices.
To conclude, the improvements in the healthcare department increases people’s long-living rate far better off than few decades. Although there are some hitches in the advancement of the health care field, the benefits have beaten the negative aspects. This essay discussed why the advantages of healthcare developments prevail over the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, well, for example, in addition, in fact, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57142857143 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07333571791 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56146179402 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5558652251 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6470588235 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7058823529 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23529411765 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293474627132 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086443970857 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952109724274 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200887957724 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132147981319 0.056905535591 232% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.73 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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