“Motilac is a substance that occurs naturally in the human digestive tract. Many consumers of dietary supplements containing motilac report significant easing of digestive discomfort after just a few weeks of use. Among Greenhorne residents, the consumption of motilac supplements has increased 80% over the last seven years. Last year, Greenhorne’s five hospitals reported fewer cases of serious gastrointestinal disorders than any year on record. Meanwhile, sales of motilac supplements are declining in the neighboring town of Etolin. Notably, hospitals in Etolin report a steady increase in the last two years in patients experiencing a wide range of distressing gastrointestinal symptoms. The clear explanation of these trends is that motilac is effective in preventing many serious gastrointestinal disorders."
On the first read, the author's explanation for the decrease of gastrointestinal disorders in Greenhorne due to Motilac seems plausible but giving some thought one can say that there can be other reasons due to which the decrease in the disease has been caused.
To begin with, the easing of digestive comfort in consumers of Motilac could be due to a balanced diet or exercise that they have been practicing and not solely due to the consumption of Motilac. In that case, the credit for the decrease in discomfort cannot be given to Motilac selectively. Also, the reason for which the residents are consuming more Motilac supplements is unspecified. It might have other benefits that are unlisted in the passage due to which people are buying the supplements. An increase in consumption over 80% over seven years is not indicative of total sales of the supplement and nor of its supposed use. People might be buying Motilac containing supplements for other factors in which it has been effective.
Moreover, the correlation between fewer cases of serious gastrointestinal disorders and consumption of Motilac makes no sense whatsoever. The lower cases of these disorders could be due to various reasons such as increased water quality in Greenhorne, reduced intake of junk and spicy foods, etc. Also, the total number of hospitals in Greenhorne is not reported; hospitals other than those five could be showing a reverse trend in which case the positive effect of Motilac becomes unreliable.
Furthermore, the author points out the decrease in sales of Motilac in Etolin and correlates it to the rise of gastrointestinal disorder cases in the city. The reduction in sales could be due to the decrease in the supply of dietary supplements in Etolin because of which they are mostly unavailable in that region. In another scenario, if the supplements are still available, people in Etolin might have stopped consuming the supplement due to its inefficacy which directly contradicts the author's assumption. The reason for the increase in cases of gastronomical disorders in the region could be opposite to that in Greenhorne i.e. reduced water quality and increased intake of junk and spicy foods and not due to non-consumption of Motilac.
All in all, the author provides an opinionated explanation to persuade readers about the efficacy of Motilac against gastrointestinal disorders. All the evidence that supported the argument is too superficial and hence to draw a conclusion it needs more research and detailed information.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4,0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 8 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 409 350
No. of Characters: 2087 1500
No. of Different Words: 187 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.497 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.103 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.977 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 149 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 122 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 88 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 60 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 27.267 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.98 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.533 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.381 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.603 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.089 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 24, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
On the first read, the authors explanation for the decrease of gastroi...
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Line 7, column 492, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...efficacy which directly contradicts the authors assumption. The reason for the increase...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, still, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.6327345309 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 11.1786427146 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 13.6137724551 103% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 28.8173652695 62% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 55.5748502994 124% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2130.0 2260.96107784 94% => OK
No of words: 409.0 441.139720559 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20782396088 5.12650576532 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03337563754 2.78398813304 109% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 204.123752495 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459657701711 0.468620217663 98% => OK
syllable_count: 679.5 705.55239521 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.76447105788 137% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.8473053892 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6860776222 57.8364921388 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.125 119.503703932 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5625 23.324526521 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 5.70786347227 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180201502688 0.218282227539 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696931495666 0.0743258471296 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532556910486 0.0701772020484 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961562543217 0.128457276422 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693298398018 0.0628817314937 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.3799401198 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.3550499002 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.197005988 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.5979740519 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.32208582834 105% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 98.500998004 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.1389221557 108% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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