government has a responsibility to its citizens to ensure their safety. Therefore, some people think that the government should increase spending on defense but spend less on social benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Well, in this modern world safety of the citizens is one of the main concern of the federation. For this purpose some thought that government should spend more or defence and decrease there investment on social benifits; however, I am not agree with this notion. In my opinion equall investment is required in both parts.
To start with, the needs of spend money on defence sector. Firstly, it is quite important to invest in military because of the fact, it protect a whole country from the evils or from there enemies. Furthermore, soldiers fight with terrorists; for this purpose they required advance technology gadgets and weapons, that is why is become mandatory for the government to invest in this sector and if, they do not do so then, whole country security will lack behind. In addition, a nation may pay serious consequences and common people will suffer a lot and this type of situation also bring recession they will defanitly not good for business at all.
However, despite of the need to spend money on this ; but social benifits can not be neglected they also request some funding. First and foremost, it is government duty. To elaborate, this is the role of the federation to provide enough facilities to ensure, the citizens can earn there bread and butter and can have basic human needs. It make them fell not only happy but also satisfied. Moreover, it is the government duty to take care of the individuals; furthermore, they pay taxes to the government , in a result it become important for authority to provide all type of social benifits to its natives. Thus, this aspect also hold important in order to get funding from the government.
In conclusion, there is no doubt, military required funds to deal with the counter parts and evils of the society; in contrast, social welfare also required money because authority impose taxes on the people for this.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, no doubt, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8753894081 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57449654771 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532710280374 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.7224527371 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.785714286 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0714285714 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156104708551 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566423427456 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552104356674 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996451458791 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506358830346 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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