Some people think that government funding should not be spent for supporting art, and culture, others think supporting cultural activities may be beneficial for the population and the culture.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Resources allocated towards artistic and cultural activities have come under increasing scrutiny as many people believe that governments needlessly divert federal grants away from more essential areas. Despite ostensibly legitimate defenses underpinning this sentiment, I would contend that this development is beneficial in the aggregate for various socio-economic advantages.
Those who decry investments in arts and culture often point to the more pressing matters which should be prioritized. One illustration of this is that in order to effectively promote culture, millions must be spent on erecting galleries, and organizing media campaigns. The incurred costs, therefore, could reduce the governmental treasuries and funds for public services which must be evenly distributed to wider segments of society. However, this claim is questionable in its statistical validity as such investments appear somewhat negligible on a federal scale. For example, in 2017 legislative appropriations to state projects and jurisdictional arts agencies in the US aggregated about $350 million which translated to less than $1.5 per capita or roughly 0.05% of the total state budget.
In addition, this development should be seen as progress thanks to its resultant economic stimulation and social catalyst. This sentiment rests on the idea that arts make the public spaces more vibrant, and efficiently transform them into forums for civic discourses and public activities; thus , leveraging urban revitalization, strengthening social capital, and fostering community cohesion. From an economic standpoint, a strong arts sector is a valuable asset that stimulates business activity, facilitates tourism across a divergent range of industries. In fact, the 2015 annual report published by the Census Bureau has revealed that arts and cultural production has become a predominant economic driver that unilaterally constituted $750 billion of national GDP on average, far surpassing both transportation and construction. At the same time, the employment opportunities and tax revenues can be redirected towards other areas and help alleviate some degrees of poverty and crime rates.
In conclusion, given the relatively insignificant fiscal concerns, I believe that this practice should be deemed beneficial as it greatly contributes to economic prosperity and social
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 41, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put before the verb 'culture'.
Suggestion: often culture
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Line 3, column 294, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...c discourses and public activities; thus , leveraging urban revitalization, streng...
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Line 3, column 432, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'arts'' or 'art's'?
Suggestion: arts'; art's
.... From an economic standpoint, a strong arts sector is a valuable asset that stimula...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2011.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.89736070381 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21479626362 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.680351906158 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.452380087 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.692307692 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2307692308 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221316499054 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686794506524 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396224554113 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12110360574 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275202877079 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.0946893788 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.24 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.36 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 78.4519038076 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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