Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Human activity is making the earth a worse place to live. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The world is changing at a rapid pace which means new technological advancement are coming out. In my opinion, I personally believe that many of the human activites making the earth a worse place for living. In the following essay I intentd to put forth my argument to support my views.
To begin with, the human activites such as smokes from factories, cars and industries increases pollution. this pollution leads to the increase carbon dioxide in the enviroment which causes the global warming. The increase amount of carbon dioxide is very dangerous for human health as well it is increases the temperature of earth every year by few degrees. So, it is possible in coming year the climatic conditions will not be favourable for human. To exemplify, according to the recent research from a health organization showed that 70% people in the world are suffering from different allergies like sinusitis, eye allergies. Theses allergies are very common nowdays than they were previously. this is because the air is very much polluted and human did not take measure to keep it clean. As a result, without a doubt the human activities are making the planet a worse place for living.
In addition, plastic is very harmful when not properly disposed off which means it damages the planet ecosystem when proper measures are not taken to clean it. The use of plastics is very common by human and many people do not properly dump it due to which it disturbes the ecosystem of the earth. For instance, many fishes in the oceans were endangered because the plastic waste dumped by the industries leads to death of the small fishes and other water animals.
In conclusion, I firmly agree with the statement that human activity is making the planet a worse place to live. this is because they are causing the global warming which has bead effect on human health, and because the materials invent by human such a plastic disturbs the ecosystem of the planet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87687687688 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55387353206 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513513513514 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7573746764 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8125 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206312225215 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764572620327 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105771653555 0.0737576698707 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133840918183 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664737581539 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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