Every person in this world has a lot of tasks to do daily; job and take cares of his family. this will get him strees. This is due to complex life that we face now a days. whether because of people busy doing many things, they do very few things well or not. This can be weighed in many aspect. Some person think that it dose not matter person busy or not. He should be doing well thing in any situation. In my opinion, I concur with the statement that, when individule become busy with a ,lot of thing, he will not be enable to do many thins in same time perfectly. In the following essay I will elaborates on a couple reason to explain my piont of view in this subject.
To begin with, involv ing in many tasks will decrease our mental concentration. this is mainly because. humen being can not focus well with the work when he think with other thing in the same time. This is a compelling example from my real life. I have been working as adental assisdent about two years ago. In the other hand, I was study to comlet my requirment to be elligible to enroll in dental school. I feel work distract my. I can not preperv well to my exam. Therefore, I decided to stop working and focus on my subject to be ready to take my exam. This example breifly explan my perspective in this situation.
Second, another reason spring to my mind, When individule have more than one tasks in same time. person willbe pay attention to one thing and neglecte the other. This is because, we should spend suitible time .if we want to finish our work perfectly. Moreover, if we want to finsh them together,we can not finish both of them perfectly. because, this make us concentrate in one and do not pay attantion to other.
In conclusion, I definitly believe that people busy with many tasks can not be able to doind wel, with all of them. In stead they do few thing well.A
Every person in this world has a lot of tasks to do daily; job and take cares of his family. this will get him strees. This is due to complex life that we face now a days. whether because of people busy doing many things, they do very few things well or not. This can be weighed in many aspect. Some person think that it dose not matter person busy or not. He should be doing well thing in any situation. In my opinion, I concur with the statement that, when individule become busy with a ,lot of thing, he will not be enable to do many thins in same time perfectly. In the following essay I will elaborates on a couple reason to explain my piont of view in this subject.
To begin with, involv ing in many tasks will decrease our mental concentration. this is mainly because. humen being can not focus well with the work when he think with other thing in the same time. This is a compelling example from my real life. I have been working as adental assisdent about two years ago. In the other hand, I was study to comlet my requirment to be elligible to enroll in dental school. I feel work distract my. I can not preperv well to my exam. Therefore, I decided to stop working and focus on my subject to be ready to take my exam. This example briefly explan my perspective in this situation.
Second, another reason spring to my mind, When individule have more than one tasks in same time. person willbe pay attention to one thing and neglecte the other. This is because, we should spend suitible time .if we want to finish our work perfectly. Moreover, if we want to finsh them together,we can not finish both of them perfectly. because, this make us concentrate in one and do not pay attantion to other.
In conclusion, I definitly believe that people busy with many tasks can not be able to doind wel, with all of them. In stead they do few thing well.A
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, i feel, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32951289398 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30544206059 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515759312321 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2880892909 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.1153846154 100.406767564 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.4230769231 20.6045352989 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.96153846154 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.433081143085 0.236089414692 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129793970113 0.076458572812 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122495135872 0.0737576698707 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27012441582 0.150856017488 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.197740142339 0.0645574589148 306% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 11.7677419355 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.24 10.9000537634 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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