The given circular chart illustrates the realm of forest and wood in various nation. The data has been calibrated in percentage.
Looking at overall, it is clear the elevated figure onto in Africa and contrary side south Africa. while in Europe and Africa by the lowest figure in given of period.
Commencing with the ratio public jungle in South America and Russia are 16% and 23%, respectively. the percentage of the realm jangle in Asia is 14%, whears in Africa has slightly double it (27%). similarly, the varied significant difference in Europe and North America, meanwhile the former has 18%, and the latter has 25% in given of chart.
On the other part, the ratio of wood in South Africa is 33%, compared to in Russia has 10% more. However, the proportion of lumber in Africa is 9%, meanwhile in Asia has exactly more than double. Regardless, the percentage of wood in Europe is 20%, as against in North America has 30% in giving period. It is clear the highest figure of the South Africa than others.
- the line graph below shows the oil production and consumption in china between 1982 and 2006 56
- The chart below shows the percentage of whole world population in four countries from 1950 to 2000 with projections till 2050 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
- The table below gives information about population of over 60 year olds in six regions in 2000 and the predicted number of population over 60 in 2050 It also shows the world population over 60 in 2000 and 2050 Summarise the information in the following th 84
- The graph below shows the sales of children s books adult fiction and educational books between 2002 and 2006 in one country 93
- Scientists believe that computers will become more intelligent than human beings Some people find it a positive development while others think it is negative development Discuss both points and give your own opinion 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
... Africa and contrary side south Africa. while in Europe and Africa by the lowest figu...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...d Russia are 16% and 23%, respectively. the percentage of the realm jangle in Asia ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Similarly
...s in Africa has slightly double it 27%. similarly, the varied significant difference in E...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, similarly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 837.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72881355932 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45294052786 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519774011299 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.2913600378 43.030603864 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.0909090909 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0909090909 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0658167321595 0.215688989381 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0253702081874 0.103423049105 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443002219151 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0466903395132 0.15604864568 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389143216323 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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