Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There are individuals who believe that the major problem on environment in the modern world is the extinction of flora and fauna. Meanwhile, there are number of argument that more environmental issues are happening. Although it is hard to decide which view is more valid, I am of the idea that more seriously environmental problematic situation are occurring.
There are many explanation for the argument that extinction is the primary issue. To begin, this thought bases on the fact that significant number of animals and plants has been recorded to be killed and felled in the last few decades. For example, in 2019, the last survival individual of the White Rhino passed away which alerted governments and global citizens to take measures to prevent creatures from extinction. Moreover, the disappearance of species also leads to insufficient medical element. Plants and flowers have been used as natural treatment throughout the history of human beings. Scientists are doing devoted researches on curing methods using natural ingredients. That is the reason why loss of flora and fauna are problematic.
In contrast, I believe that there are more important problematic situations. The reason why I hold my belief that these situations affect people directly. For instance, the air pollution in many mega cities in the world is recently becoming an emergency situation as the amount of dust and carbon dioxide in the atmosphere is dangerously high which may lead to breathing problems as well as lungs diseases. In addition, the consequences of other problems such as natural disasters or loss of ozone layer can be fatal and difficult to resolve. This is mainly because climate change and global warming is happening stronger than ever before and these natural disasters are further more severe and frequent. As a result, human properties are wiped out, this may takes a long time to recover from financial, physical and mental injury.
In conclusion, some people say that the major issues on environmental case is the loss of flora and fauna. However, I strongly believe that there are more severe environmental problematic situation that cause many serious consequences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 11, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun explanation seems to be countable; consider using: 'many explanations'.
Suggestion: many explanations
...tic situation are occurring. There are many explanation for the argument that extinction is the...
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Line 4, column 188, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'situations'?
Suggestion: situations
...e more severe environmental problematic situation that cause many serious consequences. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25214899713 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86849395462 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555873925501 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0079166564 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.833333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3888888889 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38888888889 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224956541539 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607259172885 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057463320831 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140653215909 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639958500281 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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