Overpopulation in many major urban centres around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved?
Big cities are attracting to people that is why urban area is increasing day by day. It can we seen over living in large cities in every country is a critical issue. I will consider both reasons and solutions of this matter before obtaining conclusion.
It cannot deny that population is tearing like a bomb in urban areas there are so many causes behind this The pivotal factor is providing better facilities to citizen such as education, Medical So on. For example, according to the interview of that persons who were surviving in the urban places best schools and hospitals were the main which forced them to live here. Another main cause is the opportunity of jobs in this area which is not available anywhere. Hence, there is no need to prove why population is going at high level in this areas.
To curb the meance, if there are so many factors and their are various solution also.firstly, to give education to people this place is not safe for them because diseases are spreading due to huge population. For instance, the company Health Insurance attempted a survey in Different cities where they talked to human beings about the harmful effect of living here. As a result 20% people left the urban area. secondly, by providing best facilities in rural areas. Thus, it is enough to say that by using this ideas this matter will easily.
In conclusion, after thinking the both methods and solutions facilities are main factor due to which mostly people is going to big cities however, it can be solved by educating to people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77153558052 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48669960002 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576779026217 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9475663234 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8461538462 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173520536024 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604595619283 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387982930655 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101497628337 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287611226449 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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