Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they released from prison what do you think about causes of this what possible solutions can you suggest?
Crimes are becoming a hot issue in a world. criminals are walking freely like street dogs. There are various offenders who prefer to re offence after coming from prison. I will consider both causes and solutions of this matter before arriving to conclusion.
It is not to deny that after returning from prison most of the criminals apply for new crime due to some reasons. The pivotal factor behind this is that the law brokers know there is neither anybody nor law available which will stop to them for their offence. For example,after the investigation in Chandigarh by CID. They found police was promoting to criminals for their illegal activities.secondaly, law breakers have huge money. By using capital they release easily from prison. Hence, it is enough to prove why re offence are happening.
To curb the meance, there is a need to take strict actions against those people who are doing illegal activities again and again. Firstly, government should take step against those police officers who are motivating to criminals. For instance, in china 2000 government had taken Regination from all the cops who were involving with offenders. which reduce almost 70% offence in that nation.Another main solutioni s to give directly death order to law breaker which create fear in all typical offender. Thus, applying these solution no criminal will think about re offence.
In conclusion, after evaluating causes and controlling methods. I personally feel that, there are several cops which are helping to lead their crime again despite, by launching hard rules and regulation crime will be finished.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, second, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4918699187 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17171394 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674796747967 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 20.2975951904 241% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.322461618 49.4020404114 237% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 270.2 106.682146367 253% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.2 20.7667163134 237% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.2 7.06120827912 229% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160536388742 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807144332336 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437452966616 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948150275873 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346958669828 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.0 13.0946893788 221% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.28 50.2224549098 26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 11.3001002004 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.45 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.69 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.1190380762 213% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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