Some people say that the main environmental problem our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, few individuals supposed the absence of spectacular fauna and flora species is an environmental worrisome issue, whilst others feel there are more significant problems that need to be addressed. While I consider the impact of recurring natural catastrophes to be substantial, I agree with the second view and the two opinions will be discussed in detail.
There are countless reasons explain why various species are endangered. Firstly, deforestation and desertification have witnessed an alarming growth with millions of trees have been cut down for cultivating and grazing. Consequently, numerous valuable native herbs, as well as fauna, are not conserved. Additionally, overfishing decreases a large number of aquatic creatures such as blue whales or kinds of sharks that have been hunted brutally in the past decades. In detail, researchers estimated that there are only a few thousand of them left on Earth, and shortly, the number will decline to some hundred of that.
Despite that, the number of significant problems that need to be addressed is greater than expected a lot. Foremost, climate change threatens every nation due to it is difficult to predict absolutely what will happen. Furthermore, droughts and floods come about more and more frequently, leading to agricultural productivity drops overwhelmingly. Besides, icebergs at the two poles of the earth have seen a rapid melting speed for the past decades, making the animals in those places have no space to inhabit. Similar to them, human beings are also in the same situation when coastal cities are sunk tardily due to the rising sea level and in the next century, scientists prognosticate that some islands or municipalities will be drowned.
To conclude, I suppose there are more pressing issues that must be addressed than the loss of specific creatures. Spectacularly, we are gradually successful in conserving various fauna and flora which is in danger of extinction by building national parks all over the world. However, deforestation and more catastrophes are becoming more and more indispensable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 340, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ed. Additionally, overfishing decreases a large number of aquatic creatures such as blue whales o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, so, well, while, i suppose, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4128440367 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08232305705 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633027522936 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9511350257 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120983709098 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367380465738 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408223298811 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0751135583248 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048423606317 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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