As mass communication and transport continue to grow, societies are becoming more and more alike leading to a phenomenon known as globalisation. Some people fear that globalisation will inevitably lead to the total loss of cultural identity.
What are the primary reasons for losing cultural identity and what can be done to protect it in our globalised world?
In this contemporary era, globalization plays a dramatical role. Number of people are travelling and interacting with persons of diverse backgrounds. Thus, communities are becoming somewhere similar. However, few individuals believes that globalization may cause in loss of cultural identity. This essay will explain few problems and provide some solutions.
To commence with, nowadays most of the citizens have to travel and interact with individuals of multifarious culture reasons could be work, study or others. Therefore, sometimes they got influenced by others culture and want to adopt it. Albeit, most of the times they have to be a part of their culture in order to keep some official and personal relationship for survival. For instance, many employees have to travel to foreign countries where they can find suitable job so that they can fulfill the needs of their families and it can not be denied that some youngsters are influenced by western culture.
However, in order to mitigate this problem, every student have to taught the values of their culture and how it can impact their future positively. Furthermore, school and parents should make sure that they are following their culture from childhood. In addition, some motivational speeches and seminars will be more beneficial. Respecting all people from different culture is important nevertheless following your own should be mandatory. Consequently, citizens should not forgot their own origin and religious values.
To recapitulate, travelling and interacting with others is inevitable. However, respecting and following your own religion and culture is extremely significant. This will help them to make their own identity in foreign land.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 475, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'forget'
Suggestion: forget
...tory. Consequently, citizens should not forgot their own origin and religious values. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54752851711 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97629995207 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570342205323 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.1761964431 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8235294118 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4705882353 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17647058824 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10134097878 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.036827674725 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315568815219 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0651448891127 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183572652671 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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