Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Over the years, deforestation and climate change has been a part of our daily news. So much so, that more often than not we tend to turn a blind eye towards it. This ignorance of the government officials has sparked a huge conversation urging nations to pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state.
Preserving the remaining wilderness is as important as any other domestic or foreign affair that would require the attention of the top government officials. Passing laws on preserving wilderness would improve the health of the residents not just living at the edge of the forest, but also for residents in nearby major cities. Most of the metropolitan cities of the world are crippled with an ever increasing over-population which in return leads to many cars as well as factories being crammed in a small area releasing harmful fumes and gasses that the residents breath everyday. Huge cities like Delhi and Beijing's smog cloud has been caught on camera's in space stations frequently. Preserving the wilderness around these areas would significantly improve the air quality index in such cities allowing the residents to get fresh air and improve health conditions.
Wilderness does not only play a part in helping humans, but also to animals. Over the years, many animals have become endangered while many more have gone extinct. Animals are forced out of their natural habitat, pressuring them to either adopt to their new environment or give up altogether. Many animals survive but are poached by people, unable to defend themselves outside their usual habitat. Although many conservational efforts have been made to revive populations of endangered animals, they are still being forced to adopt to the human environment.
Preserving wilderness, or whatever that is left can leave less space for modern development. This can have a direct impact on many companies and their architectural development plans. Foreign direct investors and manufacturing industries might condemn any law which stops them from minting more money. However, it is important to acknowledge that it's the resident's that make up any nation, and for the wellbeing of the resident's it's important to save the remaining wilderness.
It is important for the government of any nation to pass laws to preserve the wilderness areas in their natural state in order to help not just the residents of the nation have better quality of air, but also for the animals who deserve to live in their untouched, natural habitat.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 557, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'residents'' or 'resident's'?
Suggestion: residents'; resident's
...asing harmful fumes and gasses that the residents breath everyday. Huge cities like Delhi...
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Line 3, column 574, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...es and gasses that the residents breath everyday. Huge cities like Delhi and Beijings sm...
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Line 5, column 240, Rule ID: ADOPT_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'adapt to'?
Suggestion: adapt to
...ural habitat, pressuring them to either adopt to their new environment or give up altoge...
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Line 5, column 527, Rule ID: ADOPT_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'adapt to'?
Suggestion: adapt to
...animals, they are still being forced to adopt to the human environment. Preserving w...
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Line 7, column 348, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...er, it is important to acknowledge that its the residents that make up any nation, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2121.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 411.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16058394161 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79464088938 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532846715328 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 664.2 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9449504612 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.833333333 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 5.21951772744 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220713931061 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649635669218 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712766309326 0.0758088955206 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134094600928 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535712737562 0.0667264976115 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.