There are few individuals in society who believe that the young ones must adopt our culture and traditions. While other argue that a children’s must be had freedom to be independent rather than follow any culture or tradition. This essay intended to analyze both the perspectives however I agree with the formal view.
First of all, the young minds are a resort of western cultures and due to this our culture and traditions are blink to exit. The day is not so far when our culture will be on merely the pages of the book. So to make our culture alive we must go after our rituals and customs so that it can be passed to our next generations. Moreover, there are numerous practices done in our traditions which are beneficial to us. For example Yoga, which is now widespread to the various corners of the world and one can stay fit and healthy by pursuing it daily and it can also cure deadly diseases like cancer and asthma.
On the other hand, the youngsters feel that they must be independent to live their lives like in the western countries. They shall not abide by culture and traditions. They believe that they can enjoy their lives more freely if they are independent. For example, they think that wearing traditional clothes like pajamas, kurta, dhoti and so on are not comfortable every time as compared to the western coast like shorts, T-shirts, shirts and many more.
To conclude, It can be stated that, the children must know about our culture and traditions on the contrary it should be it not make compulsory to promulgate our culture and tradition, and they must be given independence to live according to themselves. By this local culture will also exist, and they also live with joy and cheers.
- SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT YOUNG PEOPLE SHOULD FOLLOW THE TRADITIONS OF THE SOCIETY WHILE OTHER PEOPLE THINK THAT YOUNG PEOPLE SHOULD BE FREE TO BEHAVE AS INDIVIDUALS DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION 56
- The spread of multinational companies and the resulting increase of globalisation produce positive effects to everyone Do you agree or disagree 61
- The spread of multinational companies and the resulting increase of globalisation produce positive effects to everyone Do you agree or disagree 61
- Q Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
- Nowadays families are not as close as in the past and a lot of people have become used to this Why is this happening Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the drawbacks 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, sort of, first of all, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69636963696 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5240124889 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534653465347 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7144722115 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.642857143 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100154409348 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386309646043 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346134746649 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0719489827614 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427726685711 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.