Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Having opinion supposes that the disappearance of rare species is the most pivotally environmental problem, the others say it is trivial when analyzing all issues. In my opinion, i think we must pay attention to both of them in order to preserve our planet from danger.
It is clear that the problems relating to endangered animals need to be neatly taken place. But on the one hand, we also ought to keep an eye on other issues such as pollution, traffic jam, globalization, economic growth, environment,... because a fresh planet is a place which all problems must be thoroughly addressed.
Firstly, as mentioned, illegally hunting animals and harming nature are always the crucial problems that lead to their deaths. Like we have known, valuable creatures lively make our biosystem. Additionally, it also helping investigate bioscience because these features are extremely scarce and special; For example, the white tiger is uncommon owing to its appearance, and now on the earth, they are less and less. So the things that we must perform are preventing them from cruel people and conserving their habitats.
Otherwise, there are different important issues. As mentioned, they are as pivotal as endangered animals. In those circumstances, we have to take action, we have to chase and solve the risks. People can be divided into many organizations to do everything to protect this planet, we are human and problems will occur repeatedly which relate to all areas in life, not only things about creatures but also things about many other fields. So let is make an appointment to discuss and give opinions. Then we will try to keep our home from risks
In conclusion, it is obvious that both preserving endangered animals and other problems are enormously noticeable. So you should protect nature and make a healthy place where you can comfortably live and teach it for the next generations
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Suggestion: , .
...balization, economic growth, environment,... because a fresh planet is a place whi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tedly which relate to all areas in life, not only things about creatures but also...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve and teach it for the next generations
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, then, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08333333333 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84603834369 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592948717949 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5925115798 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.125 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205959904569 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620587982446 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587713434031 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117854314281 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057869781977 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.