Some people believe that hosting international sports events is good for the country while some people think it is bad Discuss both these views and state your opinion KHANH HOMEWORK JUNE 12

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: worldwide
Organizing world wide sprort event is no more surprises and t...
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Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WORLD_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
Suggestion: worldwide
Organizing world wide sprort event is no more surprises and t...
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Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...s and this sport market still grown big.In contrast there’re many opinion protest ...
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Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...nd this sport market still grown big.In contrast there’re many opinion protest this case...
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Line 1, column 148, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...here’re many opinion protest this cases.But this there is two main reasons people...
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Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...many opinion protest this cases.But this there is two main reasons people hate th...
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Line 2, column 50, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: The
...two main reasons people hate this event.The first factor is they think that organiz...
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Line 2, column 239, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'interrupt'
Suggestion: interrupt
...tadium or take places for festival will interrupting there area .other think that is a bad i...
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Line 2, column 262, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...or festival will interrupting there area .other think that is a bad idea for a gov...
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Line 2, column 349, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...nt to invest so much money on only sport,it’s required so much taxes for chair,secu...
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Line 2, column 367, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ch money on only sport,it’s required so much taxes for chair,security,stadium and sp...
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Line 2, column 387, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , security
...rt,it’s required so much taxes for chair,security,stadium and sport facilities. Neverthe...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nevertheless,
...security,stadium and sport facilities. Nevertheless sprort occation also bring up the touri...
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Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun spectator seems to be countable; consider using: 'many spectators'.
Suggestion: many spectators
... of there country tourism increase with many spectator also expand make the selled of ticket g...
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Line 3, column 193, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...pand make the selled of ticket grow big.There is a noteworthy such as the NBA and FIF...
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Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...is a noteworthy such as the NBA and FIFA ,they have made a exelent as a inspiratio...
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Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...uch as the NBA and FIFA ,they have made a exelent as a inspiration for many peopl...
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Line 3, column 269, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...A and FIFA ,they have made a exelent as a inspiration for many people around the ...
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Line 3, column 393, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , sponership
...more investment in sport and cooperation,sponership and long term friendly for many contine...
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Line 3, column 432, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun continent seems to be countable; consider using: 'many continents'.
Suggestion: many continents
...n,sponership and long term friendly for many continent. In summary while there is still many ...
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Line 4, column 33, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun feedback seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much bad feedback', 'a good deal of bad feedback'.
Suggestion: much bad feedback; a good deal of bad feedback
...inent. In summary while there is still many bad feedback about this occation,but I comit this wi...
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Line 4, column 70, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...ll many bad feedback about this occation,but I comit this will be a long term tradit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, second, so, still, while, in contrast, in summary, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 41.998997996 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22330097087 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19510418207 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587378640777 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 20.2975951904 335% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 142.971636659 49.4020404114 289% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 358.666666667 106.682146367 336% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.6666666667 20.7667163134 331% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 31.3333333333 7.06120827912 444% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138605876506 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094704396816 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0214532847677 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0834047690509 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244655811448 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.5 13.0946893788 286% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 2.46 50.2224549098 5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.8 11.3001002004 264% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.18 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.23 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.2 10.1190380762 289% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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