Your friend is about to move into a new house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
offer to help him/her to move
explain how exactly you can help
ask him/her some questions about the new house
Dear John,
I'm glad to hear from you after a long time and came to know that you are moving into a new house. I'm dropping you a line to offer some help while shifting.
As you mentioned that you're planning to move this Sunday, I would be happy to help you and Maria, as I know how difficult it is to shift from one place to another. In fact, I owe you one since you helped me in selling my old car last year.
As for how could I help you, I am free this weekend and I could come over to give both of you a hand in packing. I won't mind doing babysitting as well, as it would be quite difficult for her to manage everything with a kid around. Please don't bother to cook, I'll bring some food for all of us.
As far as your new house is concerned and as both of you are nature lovers, I'm sure you must have considered a house with plenty of space for gardening, isn't it? What about parking space? I hope that would not be an issue here at your new house, which you face most of the time in your current one.
Anyway, that's all for now and I look forward to hearing from you.
Cheers,
Ell
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear John, Im glad to hear from you after a long time...
^^
Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...w that you are moving into a new house. Im dropping you a line to offer some help ...
^^
Line 5, column 23, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...hile shifting. As you mentioned that youre planning to move next week, I would be ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 232, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...to manage everything with a kid. Please dont bother to cook, Ill bring some food for...
^^^^
Line 7, column 253, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...with a kid. Please dont bother to cook, Ill bring some food for all of us. As fa...
^^^
Line 7, column 257, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Ill) must be used with a third-person verb: 'brings'.
Suggestion: brings
... a kid. Please dont bother to cook, Ill bring some food for all of us. As far as y...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 77, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...d and as both of you are nature lovers, Im sure you must have considered a house w...
^^
Line 9, column 154, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...use with plenty of space for gardening, isnt it? What about parking space? I hope th...
^^^^
Line 11, column 9, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...he time in your current one. Anyway, thats all for now and I look forward to heari...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, if, look, so, well, while, as for, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 3.99514563107 4.54256449028 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.93769601583 2.54303337028 76% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635922330097 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0217822636 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8181818182 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271912386302 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914204404298 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626719997187 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138452797534 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767064768296 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.05 70.7449484536 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.92 8.71597938144 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.06 7.59969072165 80% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.