Some people think that organizing international sports events is good for the host country while others think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion
Hosting international sports events plays a certain role all over the world in many different ways.There are controversies whether it brings benefits for the host country or not. In this essay, both positive and negative views will be discussed.
On the one hand, a country can take advantage of organizing sports events in many aspects regarding the country’s development. First of all, the country where big sports events are held can develop tourism and the economy. It is clear that the number of foreigners visiting a country tends to increase, not only do they watch the games, but also spend time going on holiday and travelling to famous destinations. As a result, tourism at the same time can be boosted and contributes to economic development. Moreover, when leading the event, it is the opportunity for the host country to gain reputation and enhance the relationships with other countries who participate in the sports events. For example, Vietnam hosted Sea Games in 2018 making the country to be more well-known over Asia through news, sponsorships, and TV programs. Diploma is also needed more in the period of sports events, which would require both countries to communicate well in order to ensure the success of the event.
On the other hand, some people still doubt the drawbacks of being a host country in these sports events. One of the possible negative effects here is the increase of the country's debt when using too much government budget for facilities improvement and event preparations. Debts happen when the development of the economy is not enough to cover a huge amount of money paid for the slot of hosting international events,along with the other budgets for organizing events. Another drawback in this case is the conflicts between foreigners and the people of the host country. It is undeniable that in big events, such as the World Cup, there are fights between spectators from two countries after the match, which can affect directly to both countries when losing control.
In conclusion, the pros of hosting international sports events turn out to be more regarding the cons. But many people still raise a question about this situation, so it cannot be stated clearly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05191256831 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78298371495 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543715846995 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8252262107 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5625 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8125 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306477000539 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105689905327 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584435491274 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191409417142 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317350005683 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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