Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Hitherto, globalization has resulted an incredible growth of the sports industry, and the question of whether this revolution brings our society benefits or drawbacks has received public attention. While many people lament that it is not critical to be the host of a sports event, I oppose this view by giving some rational evidence.
First and foremost, there are some foreseeable drawbacks to being a host of sporting events. The financial issue is the most pressing issue for the government to address, as the cost of competition's equipment is enormous, potentially limiting the country's ability to develop in the future and lowering citizens' living standards. Furthermore, the centralization of many countries from different parts of the world will heighten the risk of getting dangerous viruses. The most vivid example is that, in this day and age, India is facing the nightmare of a Corona pandemic, which has killed thousands of Indians, or some new types of viruses that are rapidly spreading in the Asia zone.
From an economic standpoint, the aforementioned disadvantages are easily remedied by some professional solutions. Being a host country for a sporting event can boost a country's reputation in some ways, as there is a high demand for games, which means that many tourists visit the host country. The authorities can utilize this chance to spread multi-country friendships, in order to resilient their country from a period of economic instability and even lead their country to the pinnacle of economic development. According to the illness issue, every country arriving at the hosting location must undergo a 21-day quarantine and will be given a blood sample to analyze virus potential.
To summarize, it is obvious to organize a sports competition unless the host ignores the risk potential.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... it is not critical to be the host of a sports event, I oppose this view by giving som...
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... summarize, it is obvious to organize a sports competition unless the host ignores the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27586206897 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98451014948 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596551724138 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.2633957767 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.090909091 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3636363636 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254463336527 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096100034047 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804250740032 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141240426377 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056725582357 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.