The passage and lecture are both disccusing causes of Steller" sea cows extiniction. The writer claims three theriories about main cause of extiniction. The lecturer casts doubts on claim made in article. He mention. Truth beyond the declination in seacow population is unkown. And there is aproblem with each therory that reading passage mentioned.
First, the author states, sea cows extinict from overhunted by native Siberian. sea cows are a good source of food for this group of people in harsh environment. This statement is challenged by lecturer. He elaborates on a huge size of sea cows. He says, one cow can feed many population for two month. Therefore Sibwrian people did not need to hunt many cows. They just killed few cows. This explain that hunting is not main reason in dcrease sea cows numbers.
Second, the auther argues, sea cow population extinict because of ecosystem diturbance. furthermore, this change in climate may cause decline in food sources which sea cows depend on like Kelps species that seecow feed on. The professore contradicts this argument. He mentions. Any ecosystem disturbance should cause extination to other animals not only affect sea cow. But, there is no evidences which elaborate on any other animals wextinict in this period.
Finally. the author says, European fur trader cause sea cow distiniction. The professor in the other hand refutes this notion. He asserts extiniction occur many years before coming of European people. There is another thing which cause this extiniction.
The passage and lecture are both disccusing causes of Steller" sea cows extiniction. The writer claims three theriories about main cause of extiniction. The lecturer casts doubts on claim made in article. He mention. Truth beyond the declination in seacow population is unkown. And there is aproblem with each therory that reading passage mentioned.
First, the author states, sea cows extinict from overhunted by native Siberian. sea cows are a good source of food for this group of people in harsh environment. This statement is challenged by lecturer. He elaborates on a huge size of sea cows. He says, one cow can feed many population for two month. Therefore Sibwrian people did not need to hunt many cows. They just killed few cows. This explain that hunting is not main reason in dcrease sea cows numbers.
Second, the auther argues, sea cow population extinict because of ecosystem diturbance. furthermore, this change in climate may cause decline in food sources which sea cows depend on like Kelps apecies that seecow feed on. The professore contradicts this argument. He mentions. Any ecosystem disturbance should cause extination to other animals not only affect sea cow. But, there is no evidences which elaborate on any other animals wextinict in this period.
Finally. the auther says, European fur trader cause sea cow distiniction. The professor in the other hand refutes this notion. He asserts extiniction occur many years before coming of European people. There is another thing which cause this extiniction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The passage and lecture are both disccus...
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...iories about main cause of extiniction. The lecturer casts doubts on claim made in ...
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Suggestion: mentions
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Suggestion: Sea
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Line 2, column 273, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun population seems to be countable; consider using: 'many populations'.
Suggestion: many populations
... of sea cows. He says, one cow can feed many population for two month. Therefore Sibwrian peopl...
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Line 2, column 297, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...ne cow can feed many population for two month. Therefore Sibwrian people did not need...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...can feed many population for two month. Therefore Sibwrian people did not need to hunt ma...
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Suggestion: Furthermore
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Message: Did you mean 'there are no evidences'?
Suggestion: there are no evidences
...r animals not only affect sea cow. But, there is no evidences which elaborate on any other animals we...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...her animals wextinict in this period. Finally. the auther says, European fur trader ...
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Suggestion: The
...ls wextinict in this period. Finally. the auther says, European fur trader cause...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...this period. Finally. the auther says, European fur trader cause sea cow distin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, may, second, so, therefore, another thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.01324503311 319% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1373.03311258 94% => OK
No of words: 246.0 270.72406181 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24796747967 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69349053617 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 145.348785872 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613821138211 0.540411800872 114% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 419.366225166 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 13.0662251656 168% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 21.2450331126 52% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.7830468249 49.2860985944 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.6818181818 110.228320801 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.1818181818 21.698381199 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.40909090909 7.06452816374 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 4.19205298013 286% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.27373068433 304% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392474923085 0.272083759551 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104592864384 0.0996497079465 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109103173336 0.0662205650399 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25708392339 0.162205337803 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.215260326992 0.0443174109184 486% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.3589403974 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 53.8541721854 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.0289183223 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.99 12.2367328918 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 63.6247240618 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.7273730684 42% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.498013245 61% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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