Some people think that getting a degree from universities is the best way to guarantee a good job, others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
Education has been long acknowledged to play an important role in one’s life. When it comes to education, there has been a big controversy over whether owning a universities degree or working experience enables us to get a decent job. While work experience is beneficial for one’s career prospects in certain aspects, I strongly believe that universities degrees are the determining factor.
To begin with, work experience undeniably offers workers a number of advantages. First and foremost, on straight attendance into the workforce, we are supposed to accustom ourselves to the working conditions and society more early. Not only does it make us more experienced workers and ourselves but it also has to do with our later career promotions. Secondly, by participating in labor early, we also have more opportunities to discover possible and suitable career paths, due to the acknowledgment of our strengths and shortcomings. Finally, working straight afterward develops our sense of responsibility, confidence, and maturity. These characteristics have been proved to be extremely advantageous to the working labor themselves.
On the other hand, it is degrees from universities that determine how successful we can be in our job. First of all, higher education provides school-leavers better stands in job-selection processes. A well-qualified graduate will stand out from other applicants and is more likely to be offered the job. Moreover, by attending universities, students are more likely to develop long-term relationships with people who share the same professions. Consequently, they can be backed up when problems occur and therefore enhance their job security. Last but not least, degrees from universities surely give students deeper insights and knowledge about their field. These understandings undoubtedly accelerate career promotions of those who earn them and graduates will gain respect from colleagues as well.
In conclusion, although working early means becoming successful early, in the long run, universities degrees are to decide the levels of achievements one may gain. Therefore, it is advisable that we take on higher education to reach our full potentials in the competitive working environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 160, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...n a big controversy over whether owning a universities degree or working experien...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, as to, in conclusion, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1898.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63204747774 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29656629915 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608308605341 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.802694799 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.444444444 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7222222222 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220887572007 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066234719797 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528164590821 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121877865985 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489620274136 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.