“Some people think that getting a degree from a university is the best way to guarantee a good job, others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead.”
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Nowadays there are two different points of view on the importance of university education. Some people think that getting a degree from university can guarantee a good job but others believe that it is better to go straight into work and get experience. To my mind, university education is an important thing in getting a good job in the future.
On the one hand, it is believed that in the university graduates get start for future career. Some people think that it is impossible to get a good well paid job without higher education because if you do not get it you will not have enough knowledge which are necessary for your profession. Also during the studying people usually improve not only hard but soft skills such as communication, creativity and critical thinking. In this way in some people's opinions getting a degree from university can guarantee you a good job. For instance, serious professions like engineers, architectors or doctors can not be got without special knowledge because if people will learn them in practice it will be dangerous for other people.
On the other hand, some people suppose that university education is not a key thing in getting a good job and it is better to go straight into work and get experience instead. In this people's opinions practice and experience in the real workplace is more necessary for the profession than theoretical knowledge which we get in university. Real work can help people to understand special sides of the profession and learn needed skills better and faster than in the university. For example, in the past there were not universities and special education organizations, where people could get a profession, so boys or young men helped masters in their work, improve their professional skills, become masters in their sphere too and in this way get a profession, which would give them money all their lives.
Taking everything into consideration, there two views on starting feture career. Some people think that getting degree from a university is a best way to get a good well paid job because in a university people get necessary for their profession knowledge. Others are sure that it is better to go straight into work and get experience because in this way people can realise some special features in their profession and get more practical knowledge and skills.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...hich are necessary for your profession. Also during the studying people usually impr...
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Line 5, column 180, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...nto work and get experience instead. In this peoples opinions practice and experienc...
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Line 7, column 141, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...hat getting degree from a university is a best way to get a good well paid job be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1955.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 394.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96192893401 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78554542508 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.421319796954 0.561755894193 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 615.6 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.0722160068 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.333333333 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2666666667 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.534567587129 0.244688304435 218% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.213918716687 0.084324248473 254% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.179657310794 0.0667982634062 269% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.380201821718 0.151304729494 251% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695129230652 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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