computers had changed life,some thinks that life become more convenient and easy and other thinks that life become more comlpes and stressful

or whether life become more stressful.
or whether life becomes more stressful.

Professional computers contains systemic programmes
Professional computers contain systemic programmes

it lead to kind of technology dependency
it leads to a kind of technology dependency

had lead to addiction and less social interactivity.
had led to addiction and less social interactivity.

Sentence: There is no doubt that life had changed since the invention of computers in the last decade.It had been a debat whether computers made life better and easier or whether life become more stressful.
Error: debat Suggestion: debate

Sentence: I personally beleive that computers had affected life positively.
Error: beleive Suggestion: believe

Sentence: Before the use of computers at work places ,all were paper work all data saved written on paper hidden on files.This required not only more man power but long working hours.Moreover whenever data had been lost for example been stolen or work place got on fire ,documents cannot be retrived.
Error: retrived Suggestion: retried

Sentence: Professional computers contains systemic programmes where informations could be kept in an orgnaized manner with ease access when needed.In addition all documents can be backed up on external memory devices.
Error: orgnaized Suggestion: organized

Sentence: Computers played a major role in the learning process,many educational facilities had applied computerized examinations system in which a unique answer model would be submitted so as evaluation not to be subjected to examiner's prespective veiw.Also no need for the student name to be written ,every one had an examination identification number to which student personal information,evaluation,exam results and grades are connected for instance british college admission exams are runned on the
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Error: prespective Suggestion: prospective

Sentence: same manner on different centers across the globe breaking geographical boundries as many applicants over all the world can apply,keeping on the same college ploicy.
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Error: ploicy Suggestion: policy

Sentence: On the other hand as computers easen life it lead to kind of technology dependency with less use of human memory and creational mind.
Error: easen Suggestion: ease
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Sentence: As any kind of technology the invention of interresting programmes and games had lead to addiction and less social interactivity.
Error: interresting Suggestion: interesting

Sentence: In summary as computers improved life quality if not governed properly it may affect life adversly in the future.
Error: adversly Suggestion: adversely

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No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 13 2

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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 13 2
No. of Sentences: 10 15
No. of Words: 308 350
No. of Characters: 1576 1500
No. of Different Words: 194 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.189 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.117 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.75 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 118 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 88 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 65 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 46 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 30.8 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 18.787 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.8 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.393 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.736 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.087 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5