Your local bookshop has invited members of the public to recommend a guest speaker for an upcoming event that will include a series of talks from well-known people.
Write an e-mail to the bookshop. In your e-mail:
• suggest a speaker
• say what they would contribute to the event
• explain why other people would be interested too
Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing this letter in response to your invitation to recommended a well-known speaker for an upcoming event that includes a series of talks with famous book writers. And, I hope that I could share some valuable names of speakers who could make this event interesting with their speech and experience.
After considering some options, I have come to think that one of the famous global writers Dale Carnegie can share an interesting talk on the importance of relationships in an individual's life. I believe you would have heard about his famous book which is " How to Win Friends and Influence with other people ". This book was the best-selling book when it came in the market and with such effect, I think it bring some true value about the importance of people in our lives when it comes to family, friends, and others. Thus, this would be a choice to invite Dale to the upcoming event to share a small talk about his experience and the importance of relationships.
His contribution would be knowledgeable to our local community since our town is not becoming friendly after the horrible incident of murder case past three weeks. People could help each other in dark times during the night because they will learn about humanity and preserve the best kind of it. Besides, the people will take interest in Dale's talk because of his famous book and stories which he has written about his life experiences with different cultures while he was traveling around the world. I hope that I am able to provide the best author of today's kind for this coming event to share the value of relations among the general public.
I am looking forward to hearing the best choice of the speaker with your's and public decision.
Yours faithfully,
Shain
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...n the importance of relationships in an individuals life. I believe you would have heard ab...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 419, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'brings'?
Suggestion: brings
...market and with such effect, I think it bring some true value about the importance of...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 632, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... share the value of relations among the general public. I am looking forward to hearing th...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 12, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...c decision. Yours faithfully, Shain
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, look, so, thus, well, while, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 26.3917525773 189% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 937.175257732 159% => OK
No of words: 307.0 206.0 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84039087948 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 3.78020617076 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53685101813 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 127.690721649 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550488599349 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 290.88556701 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.9958331597 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.833333333 76.5299724578 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 16.8248392259 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217740312815 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882946276763 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864337672682 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148015826704 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777765846683 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 8.37731958763 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...n the importance of relationships in an individuals life. I believe you would have heard ab...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 419, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'brings'?
Suggestion: brings
...market and with such effect, I think it bring some true value about the importance of...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 632, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... share the value of relations among the general public. I am looking forward to hearing th...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 12, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...c decision. Yours faithfully, Shain
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, look, so, thus, well, while, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 26.3917525773 189% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 937.175257732 159% => OK
No of words: 307.0 206.0 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84039087948 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 3.78020617076 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53685101813 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 127.690721649 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550488599349 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 290.88556701 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.9958331597 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.833333333 76.5299724578 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 16.8248392259 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217740312815 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882946276763 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864337672682 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148015826704 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777765846683 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 8.37731958763 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.