Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Through out many decades, advertising is consecutively proved to play an unchangable role in commercial trade. Two diametrically opposed opinions to this topic has been proposed: whether marketing is immensely adept in manipulating consumers buying products or it is so ubiquitous that it no longer draws people’s attention. I personally presume that advertising is the most powerful tool for many traders.
On the one hand, marketing is an irreversable way to introduce merchandise and communicate with consumers. Actually, advertising is constituted to provide costumers a better understanding and information about the products in a special way. It figures repetitive and abbrieviative appearance with attractive effects and contents, which catch lots of people’s attention. Hence, prevalent exposure to such these advertisements will gradually grow people’s desire to the products and make a buy. It can also sway people into purchasing items based on their concious or subconcious fears and needs.
On the other hand, advertising is said to be bothering sometimes. When we are watching our favorite movies or reading our real-page turners, an advertisement pops up out of the blue distracts our concentration. Moreover, it is so ubiquitous that it appears every corners we are, bringing frustrated feeling to us. However, I presume we cannot deny huge impacts it has on the commerce. Evidence that backs up my consumption is the establishment of numerous kinds of marketing like KOL for mentor or advisor, DOOH in well-known tournaments or bus-stop, the list goes on.
In conclusion, it seems to me that although advertisements make us frustrated because of its immediate distraction, it is how it figures to increase selling in global bussiness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: Throughout
Through out many decades, advertising is consecutiv...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a special way" with adverb for "special"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ding and information about the products in a special way. It figures repetitive and abbrieviativ...
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Line 2, column 595, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oncious or subconcious fears and needs. On the other hand, advertising is said t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, hence, however, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50553505535 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35456625291 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656826568266 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1436440604 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.571428571 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219832022292 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065497646351 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425955625475 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117124399753 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353028908772 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.