Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowdays, more and more people are making the choices to go to university. While some masses are of the opinion that only purpose of higher learning is to improve work prospects, nevertheless other thinks that community and the human beings benefit in much broader ways. In this essay, I would shed light on the valid standpoints of both the views.
To commemce with the first school of thought, it is certainly true that one of the key focus of varsity is to secure a better employments. In the epic era, majority of people want to improve their future carrer prospects and attending university is one of the best way to do this as it increases a person's marketable skills and attractiveness to potential employers. To examplify, according to the survey it can be vividly manifested that 90% of the good employment positions have achieved by those peoples who have prominent varsity knowledge. In additkon, fither educationis very expensive for many people, so would not consider it if it would not provide them with a more secure future and a higher standard of living. Thus, job prospects are very crucial.
Moving further, there are other benefits for civilization and mortals. Firstly, the independence of living away from the houseis a benefit because it helps the pupils develop better social skills and improves as a petson. A case in point is that many students will have to leave their families, live in halls of residence and meet new friends. Owing to this, their maturity and confidence will grow enabling them to live more fulfilling lives. Secondly, it is not only profitable for individuals, but also for their societies. Communities will gain from the contribution that the graduates can make to the economy. Through varsity education, associations have a chance to remove indigence from their folks and this is a very big problem of every nation. Apart from this, we are living in a very competitive world, so countries need educated people in order to compete and prosper.
In compendium, I believe that although a main aim of higher education is to get the best job, there are clearly further benefits. If we continue to promote and encouage university attendance, it will lead to a better future for individuals and society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 296, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
...the best way to do this as it increases a persons marketable skills and attractiveness to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1870.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94708994709 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77851338207 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560846560847 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9133734778 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.888888889 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205885718918 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558360716878 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508165890307 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130753486411 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725184313193 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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