Q3 : Human activities have negative effects on plant and animal species. Some Human activities have negative effects on plant and animal species. Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem. Others believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Recently, the effect of human activities on species of animals as well as plants has become the subject of heated debate. Some people assert that if human beings make an effort, they can prevent living creatures, such as wildlife and plants, from disappearing, while others argue otherwise. Personally, I wholeheartedly agree with the former stance. In the following essay, both views will be discussed before a conclusion is reached with my opinion.
On the one hand, those who claim that mankind cannot make it possible for numerous species of animals and plants not to become extinct do so for several reasons. Proponents of this argument insist that humans have exploit a myriad of natural habitats without taking into account environmental degradation. As an illustration, one notable natural heritage site designated by UNESCO in South Korea had various species of birds in 2010. However, the majority of these species died out due to a huge amount of waste generated by overseas visitors, which posed a threat to the local environment.
My opinion, however, is that humans can protect biodiversity. Perhaps the most compelling reason is that not only do a multitude of governments across the globe invest astronomical sums of money to mitigate the impact of global warming exerting a detrimental influence on animals and plants, but they also lunch campaigns to warn of the dangers of the disappearance of wildlife, raising awareness amongst the public. Furthermore, individuals can play vital role in conserving animals and plants. If more ordinary people participate in recycling, a great deal of non-disposal materials, including plastic that accelerates the speed of climate change, will be reduced. In light of the above I find these more persuasive.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that there are a variety of opinions about this topic. However, after considering this matter in a careful manner, I fully support the view that if every sector of our society makes a concerted effort, we can allow animals and plants to live a longer life for the reasons discussed above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'exploited'.
Suggestion: exploited
...f this argument insist that humans have exploit a myriad of natural habitats without ta...
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Line 7, column 127, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a careful manner" with adverb for "careful"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... However, after considering this matter in a careful manner, I fully support the view that if every...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21364985163 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89136517991 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643916913947 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.9554255249 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.133333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4666666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275656556606 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748554382156 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800202503373 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144601382065 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661712206143 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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