At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, many nations all around the world have recognized the overwhelming increase of young adults including children and adolescents when census indices are carefully studied. This has led to a disproportion among various age groups, resulting in a variegated picture. From my perspective, the younger people have overall more dis-credits as compared to benefits due to several factors.
The obvious primary drawback of the current situation revolves around unemployment occurring resultantly. To have a more clarified view, I would argue that the number of occupations that are created in a specific society over a particular period of time is limited. However, when the population statistic is indices reverse favoring the young, an invisible and tough competition is invented in everybody's mind about looking for a job, leading to a sharp climb in unemployment. As an obvious example, Pakistan is one of the nations witnessing rapid and dramatic growth in a few decades past. This has given young or potential students opportunities in order to develop their careers significantly.
In contrast, the benefits of this distinguished situation pivot around the human resources which are indispensable in the growth of a nation. More specifically, it means that the more talents are recruited, the more rapid improvement in the national exchequer. For instance, nations having high ratios of population aging such as Japan, Korea, or Germany are struggling in running their systems smoothly due to the non-availability of workers. Thus, they have to invest in marketing, propagating special advantages to recruit scholars from all around the world because of the lack of young people in their countries. Moreover, the elders now constitute the major population leading to exhausting meager resources due to unaffordable expenditure on their healthcare as well as rehabilitation.
To conclude, youngsters are a double-edged sword, helping develop country's economy on the one hand, whereas the other causes addition in liabilities as far as employment and other social sectors is related. As a result, the current pattern observed needs a balance according to the resources.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...in a specific society over a particular period of time is limited. However, when the populatio...
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Line 7, column 119, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'causes'' or 'cause's'?
Suggestion: causes'; cause's
...nomy on the one hand, whereas the other causes addition in liabilities as far as emplo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, so, thus, well, whereas, for instance, in contrast, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1851.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54191616766 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16960113093 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59880239521 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3152025365 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.4 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139593950254 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391635730283 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0270758958738 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0731619814269 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336481254196 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.68 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 78.4519038076 161% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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